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Ping Pong Is Better Than Poetry Because….

by Jennifer Doering

I can smash the hell out of that
pingy, zingy little ball

I can grunt and snort and
make my shots
No sibilance in me

Ping pong never makes me
count out beats
or listen for assonance
or consonance
anaphora
of my thwacking paddle
racking up points;

My shots
in conception are perfection
in execution, may be out
But I know beyond
a shadow of a doubt
When I am done, when I have won
the game.

{ 4 comments… read them below or add one }

Greg Neri August 5, 2009 at 10:46 am

As a fellow writer and ping pong player, this one hits the spot. Nothing satisfies more than hitting that winner…unless you are able to turn it into poetry too! Nicely played.

jennifer j. stewart August 15, 2009 at 10:12 am

Great poem with a wonderful opening! Now I need to go look up “anaphora.” And I have an honors degree in English…sheesh!

Marge Pellegrino August 15, 2009 at 2:41 pm

A winning poem — What fun!

Angela August 15, 2009 at 7:27 pm

I may need to take up ping-pong?

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